Your artistic and animating skills are clearly your strong point. I suggest that you stop waisting your time writing the stories and doing the voice acting and find a good writer and a good voice actor to team up with. Together you would be a force to be delt with. But on your own, your weaknesses drag down your talents.
Unoriginal, un-intelligent, and not entertaining. This isn't worthy of being called comedic or educational. Better luck next time.
Your Audio skills are stupendous, and your storys don't seem half bad either, all you could use are some illustarting and animating training, or a subcontracted visual artist. Whichever you think is more worthy.
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